A
few years ago, I was listening to a series of audio books; while recovering
from a kidney transplant. These particular novels were topping the best seller
lists and taking the country by storm. I hated them. The characters were
underdeveloped, the story line was too slow, and I was not engaged in the plot…blah,
blah, blah.
I can do better than this. I told
myself. If I know what’s wrong with these books, then I can write better ones.
Armed with my sure knowledge of how to be a great writer I set out to write a
series of stories that would top this pathetic group I had been reading.
A
year and a half later…I can’t read what I wrote; it is so bad.
What
was I thinking? Well, I was thinking that a little talent and determination are
all you need to write good stories. While that may be true; being a great
writer in your own head leaves your stories good for… only you.
Learning
How to be a good writer takes patience and hard work. More importantly, it
takes readers who like what you write. If it doesn’t make sense, capture, or
entice a reader; it is worthless. One of the best tools I have found in my
quest to be a better author; is a thorough critique.
I
am part of a critique group. A group of writers who listens to my work and then
tells me what does and doesn’t work. The other members of the group get the
same feedback on their work and then each of us has more than just ourselves to
impress.
I
also send out short stories, essays and shorter work to on-line critiques, and to
members of the three writing groups I belong to.
The
feedback of other writers is invaluable. Not only do I get to hear what readers
will be thinking, but I get the talent, expertise and know-how of an entire
universe of great writer’s. It’s like living in the library and having the
books converse with me
My
critique group made it possible for me to get Killing Casanova ready for the publisher. Thanks to the hard work
done by the critiques, edits were minor and the manuscript was immediately
accepted for publication.
That
original set of stories I wrote all those years ago, are being critiqued right
now. I hope to get them in to publication sometime this next year. Rescuing my
writing from my own flawed perceptions of what works is the reason I love
critiques.
If you want people to read your work and then
gush about how brilliant it is; give it to your mom or your best friend. If you
want to be a great writer, not just in your own head; join a critique group.
You won’t be sorry
Hi traci, I couldn't agree more. I belong to a couple of critique groups: one for poetry and one for fiction. The poetry group meets once a month at the senior center. Besides critiquing each other's work, we take turns facilitating our meetings and providing writing exercises to work on for the next meeting. The fiction group meets once a week online, using Team Talk, and we e-mail pieces to be critiqued to our list serve. These groups have inspired me over the years, and I don't know what I would do without them.
ReplyDeleteAbbie Johnson Taylor, Author of
We Shall Overcome
and
How to Build a Better Mousetrap:
Recollections and Reflections of a Family Caregiver
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